Amaterasu user:
Nice, Koala! This pic have a lot improvement. The contrast is better now. And you have also drawn the tanlines very nice! But as I mentioned in my last comment, plz take a look on a few pic of that character before you draw them. The tit size on Fuu isn't correct. She have about the tit size of Sakura which isn't that big. I recommend you to take a look of some of Rex's pics. He usually draw the characters with the correct size.
I hope you can fix this small detail, since it's a request and...
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it would be nice for Bigboss. I can see sand mixed with the brown dark color of Fuu's legs. Somewhere on her legs you can see the sand through her leg. I think if you make the contrast of the color higher, the problem will disappear. If you have any time to spare, please consider to fix it. Thanks! :D