Amaterasu user:
Nice pic, but you can improve more on Hinata's MILF face. And where the heck is her right arm (from her angle). It's missing. It could be beside her leg,
but still you should be able to see a gap between her leg and arm. This is also something that could be better. Another point of improvement could be his
six-pack. Here he only have four. But that's not a big deal. You have at least done a nice job on Hinata's body anatomy and Toneri's face, skin color and
his body generally. :) Good job,...
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pal! Keep up the good work.
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20 Jun 2018 03:26
Amaterasu user:
Nice pic, but you can improve more on Hinata's MILF face. And where the heck is her right arm (from her angle). It's missing. It could be beside her leg,
but still you should be able to see a gap between her leg and arm. This is also something that could be better. Another point of improvement could be his
six-pack. Here he only have four. But that's not a big deal. You have at least done a nice job on Hinata's body anatomy and Toneri's face, skin color and
his body generally. :) Good job,...
show more