Amaterasu user:
That's actually quite good for your first try on these character. This one is a lot better than your previous Anko pic. Here I also see room for improvement on their pussies. Rather than drawing two lines with a knot on the top, try to draw it more detailed. A real pussy have four lines. There should be some room between the lips so you actually can see an opening. But you have done a great job on their faces and body. So I will give you credit for that. ;)