Amaterasu user:
Ok try, but much improvement is needed. First, her face is too young. She looks like a genin, when I think she is supposed to look like a chuunin kunoichi. Second, she has way too big tits. She hasn't D cup tits like here. She is more like Sakura-sized tits, B cups. Also, her skin color is more dark, not that light. But on the other hand, her ass is actually good drawn. And Raikage A's face is actually quite good drawn. So at those part you have done a good job, especially Raikage A's face. Keep...
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up with the improvement, pal. I know you have the potential to become better at this. ;)